The many faces of RED

A long time ago someone gave me this poem:

The Problem in Describing Color

If I said––remembering, in summer
The cardinal’s sudden smudge of red
In the bare gray winter woods––

If I said, red ribbon on the cocked straw hat
Of the girl with the pooched-out lips
Dangling the wiry, black-nosed lapdog
In the painting by Renoir––

If I said fire, if I said blood welling from a cut––

Or flecks of poppy in the tar-grass-scented summer air
On a wind-struck hillside outside Fano––

If I said, her one red earring dangles from her silky lobe,

If she tells fortunes with a deck of fallen leaves
Until it comes out right––

Rouged nipple, mouth––

(how could you not love a woman
who cheats at Tarot?)

Red, I said. Sudden, red.

— Robert Hass

That was long ago … today I am accepting what is, yet still trying to reconcile the contradictions of who in the quest of I am – trustworthy and yet I have lied and cheated, a lover and yet I have turned cold as a stone, forgiving and yet I have harbored a lack of forgiveness towards others (and worse myself) far too often.

With a blank canvas – a bald head, a stick figure captain – and all of the disguises I could ask for – scarves and wigs – it’s easy to see how you might be different and yet you all at the same time – and that’s all right.

4 Responses to “The many faces of RED”

  1. Graham da Ponte Says:

    I love this poem, Rachel–Thanks for posting.

    So I’m finally starting a blog. No, that’s optimistic…I have a home page, hosted on my brother’s wordpress site, and I’m supposed to be blogging because he wants me to write more. But I don’t know what to write so I’m reading everyone else’s blogs. Yours has me hooked.

    I started at the beginning and find myself riveted. I can’t put you down! I think you should replace initials with names (pseudonyms, to protect the “innocent”), and publish it as a memoir in a blog format. It’s a no-brainer. Maybe I’m just starstruck cuz I know you–all I know is I have 3 movies and 2 new books that I haven’t touched cuz I’m too fascinated by dangermond.org.

  2. Rachel Says:

    G – thanks and I was thinking about your writing and I had a couple of suggestions of how to get started and then I thought of this poem and thought that she said it better than I might:

    For the young who want to
    BY MARGE PIERCY
    Talent is what they say
    you have after the novel
    is published and favorably
    reviewed. Beforehand what
    you have is a tedious
    delusion, a hobby like knitting.

    Work is what you have done
    after the play is produced
    and the audience claps.
    Before that friends keep asking
    when you are planning to go
    out and get a job.

    Genius is what they know you
    had after the third volume
    of remarkable poems. Earlier
    they accuse you of withdrawing,
    ask why you don’t have a baby,
    call you a bum.

    The reason people want M.F.A.’s,
    take workshops with fancy names
    when all you can really
    learn is a few techniques,
    typing instructions and some-
    body else’s mannerisms

    is that every artist lacks
    a license to hang on the wall
    like your optician, your vet
    proving you may be a clumsy sadist
    whose fillings fall into the stew
    but you’re certified a dentist.

    The real writer is one
    who really writes. Talent
    is an invention like phlogiston
    after the fact of fire.
    Work is its own cure. You have to
    like it better than being loved.

  3. Graham da Ponte Says:

    Love this, Rachel–thanks. I wrote my first blog post about reading your blog. It’s called 200 Words for Sorry. Now i have to figure out how to post it!

  4. Rachel Says:

    Let me know when you do because it’s impossible to search for a blog and I’d love to read it.

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